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发布时间：2017-06-05 20:43:59回顾历年12月四级作文名师改卷感悟及针对建议1.大家拿到作文题目之后，先要仔细阅读题目明确作文的类型。这一点是非常关键的因为四级相对很强调作文的结构。如果没有一个很清楚的结构，一定会失去一定的分数。四级作文一般有下面三种结构：说明文，议论文和应用文写作。说明文主要可以分为阐述主题类型的，利弊类型的，原因结果类型的，解决问题类型的以及谚语说明类型。议论文主要是就观点进行反驳类型的。应用文写作主要包括演讲词，求职求学信，邀请信，感谢信和投诉信等。所以大家必须在平时复习的过程明确各种类型的写作结构，这样在考试时候就可以在结构上不会出现任何问题，也不会因为写跑题而失分。 来源：www.yeeyi.net5.卷面一定要整洁，字一定要写的漂亮，这可以在很大程度上影响你们分数的升降。印象分数几乎全部是这个决定的，所以大家也要主要平时handwriting的练习。四六级作文评分标准及错误总结评分标准2分 条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。5分 基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。8分 基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。11分 切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。14分 切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性好。基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。(注:白卷,作文与题目毫不相关,或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想,则给0分。)常见写作错误一、主语错误1.主语缺失1)Inourcountryfeelsveryfree.Peoplefeelfreeinourcountry.2)Inmyhometownaren tverybusy.Peopleinmyhometownareverybusy.2.非名词主语1)Richdoesn tensureahappylife.Beingrichdoesn tmeanahappylife./Wealthdoesn tensureahappylife.2)Keeptwofull-timejobsissimplyimpossible.Keepingtwofull-timejobsissimplyimpossible.3.主谓错位1)Readingbookscanacquireknowledge.Peoplecanacquireknowledgefrombooks.2)Nowpeople slivescan tleaveTV.Nowpeoplecan tdowithoutTV.二、谓语错误1.多重谓语1)Inourmodernsociety,therearemanyexamplesaroundusshowthatmanypeoplearecheated.Inourmodernsociety,manyexamplesaroundusshowthatmanypeoplearecheated./Alargenumberofpeoplehavefallenvictimtovarioustricks.2)Povertymakesmanypeoplecan tstudyabroad.Povertymakesmanypeopleunabletostudyabroad./Povertymakesitimpossibleformanypeopletostudyabroad./Povertypreventsmanypeoplefromstudyingabroad./Manypeoplecan tstudyabroadbecauseofpoverty.2.非动词谓语1)Somepeoplefirmlyagree,butothersagainstit.Somepeoplefirmlyagree,butothersareagainstit.2)Itissaidthattheplaceworthstouring.Itissaidthattheplaceisworthtouring.3.主谓不一致1)IhavetovisittheteacherwhoteachmeCollegeEnglish.IhavetovisittheteacherwhoteachesmeCollegeEnglish.2)Iuseadiskbecauseitholdplentyofdata.Iuseadiskbecauseitholdsplentyofdata..4.误用词组1)Theyinsistonpost-graduatestudyisveryimportantforthem.Theyinsistthatpost-graduatestudyisveryimportantforthem.2)Iamafraidofthatit sgoingtorain.Iamafraidthatit sgoingtorain.三、冠词错误1)Inmyopinion,thefutureofbicycleisverypromising.Inmyopinion,thefutureofthebicycleisverypromising.2)Theysuggestthatweshouldchooseonlythegoodbookstoreadandnevertouchthebadones.Theysuggestthatweshouldchooseonlygoodbookstoreadandnevertouchbadones.四、代词错误1.偷梁换柱1)Animportantthingforthestudenttorememberisthatwhenwritingapaper,youshouldnotplagiarize.Animportantthingforthestudenttorememberisthatwhenwritingapaper,heshouldnotplagiarize.2)Ifwecheatothers,friendswillneverbelieveyouandtheywillleaveyoualone.Ifwecheatothers,friendswillneverbelieveusandtheywillleaveusalong./Ifyoucheatothers,friendswillneverbelieveyouandtheywillleaveyoualone.2.指代不明1)Hegaveareasonfornotattendingthemeeting,whichnobodybelieved.Hegaveareason,whichnobodybelieved,fornotattendingthemeeting./Hegaveareasonfornotattendingthemeeting,areasonwhichnobodybelieved.2)Sometimesteachershavetoinformthestudentsoftheheavyburdentheyhavetobear.Sometimesteachershavetoinformthestudentsoftheheavyburdenstudentshavetobear.五、形容词、副词错误1)Whatismore,thechangeoftheweatherwillmaketheplacelookdifferently.Whatismore,thechangeoftheweatherwillmaketheplacelookdifferent.2)Surprisingenough,hefacesthefailureverybravely.Surprisinglyenough,hefacesthefailureverybravely.六、分词误用1)Comparingwithothercountries,Chinapayslittleattentiontotheenergyproblem.Comparedwithothercountries,Chinapayslittleattentiontotheenergyproblem.2)Thosespiritswerejustlikeanindispensablepartofthewholepicturewhenviewingthroughmycamera.Thosespiritswerejustlikeanindispensablepartofthewholepicturewhenviewedthroughmycamera.七、修饰语误置1)SpokenEnglishisanimportantpartforlearningEnglishpeople.SpokenEnglishisanimportantpartforpeoplelearningEnglish.2)Tokeeptheairclean,wemustmovethefactorieswhichgiveoffpoisonousgasestothecountryside.Tokeeptheairclean,wemustmovetothecountrysidethefactorieswhichgiveoffpoisonousgasestothecountryside.八、垂悬修饰语1)Havingcarriedouteconomicreformsinourcountry,people slivingstandardhasbeengreatlyimproved.Havingcarriedouteconomicreformsinourcountry,peoplehavegreatlyimprovedtheirlivingstandard.2)Totellmyfriendthegoodnews,theletterwaspostedatonce.Totellmyfriendthegoodnews,Ipostedtheletteratonce.九、平行错误1)Whilewereducethenumberofvehicles,thespeedoftrafficcanbeincreased.Whilewereducethenumberofvehicles,wecanincreasethespeedoftraffic.2)BeforeIselectedthenewcourse,myteacherwarnedmeofthedifficultyofthecourseandhowlongitlasted.BeforeIselectedthenewcourse,myteacherwarnedmeofthedifficultyandlengthofthecourse./BeforeIselectedthenewcourse,myteacherwarnedmehowdifficultthecoursewasandhowlongitlasted.十、搭配错误1)Inthepastthepriceofmeatwassoexpensivethatmostfamiliescouldnotaffordit.Inthepastthepriceofmeatwassohighthatmostfamiliescouldnotaffordit.2)Crowdedtrafficinsomelargecitiesisabigproblemforcitydwellers.Heavytrafficinsomelargecitiesisabigproblemforcitydwellers.十一、破句1)Nowadays,ifyouwanttofindajob.Thenyoumustpassthejobinterview.Nowadays,ifyouwanttofindajob,youmustpassthejobinterview.2)Firstyoushouldshowgoodmanners.Becausethefirstimpressionyouleaveonothersisimportant.Firstyoushouldshowgoodmanners,becausethefirstimpressionyouleaveonothersisimportant.英语四六级写作经典句型1)主语从句It is common knowledge that honesty is the best policy.It is well-known thatIt is self-evident/ conceivable / obvious / apparent thatIt goes without saying that It is universally acknowledged thatIt is / thatwww.yeeyi.NET2)宾(表)语从句We cannot understand why he was so cruel to his roommates.The problem is not who will go, but who will stay.3)定语从句(限定性和非限定性)As is shown/ demonstrated/ illustrated/ depicted/ described in the cartoon/ picture/ graph/ table ,There are many reasons why I want to study in your university.It is estimated that tens of billions of pounds is spent on cigarettes every year in our country, which is a huge waste.4)状语从句(时间，原因，地点，条件，让步，转折等)When the man is enjoying the cigarette, the smoke becomes a monster (怪物) which will devour him.Whatever the reason, there are still some problems with student use of computers.5)分词短语做定语或状语Prof. Kang came to our university, giving us a lecture on how to acquire English better.6)倒装句Only through these measures can we hope to solve the problem. Scattered around the globe are more than 100 small regions of isolated volcanic activity known to geologists as hot spots.7)被动句Some measures should be taken to deal with the problem. He is said to have accomplished a lot of great deeds. Many people believe that (It is believed that8)设问句Do you still remember the boy who cried wolf for several times so no one would trust him?9)比较1.The advantages far outweigh the disadvantages.2.The advantages of A are much greater than those of B.3.A may be preferable to B, but A suffers from the disadvantages that...4.It is reasonable to maintain that ...but it would be foolish to claim that... 5.For all the disadvantages, it has its compensating advantages.6.Like anything else, it has its faults.7.A and B has several points in common.8.A bears some resemblances to B.9.However, the same is not applicable to B.10. A and B differ in several ways.11. Evidently, it has both negative and positive effects.12. People used to think ..., but things are different now.13. The same is true of B.14. Wondering as A is ,it has its drawbacks.15. It is true that A ... , but the chief faults (obvious defects )are ...10)原因壹壹英语(www.YeeYi.Net)1.A number of factors are accountable for this situation.A number of factors might contribute to (lead to )(account for ) the phenomenon(problem).2. The answer to this problem involves many factors.3. The phenomenon mainly stems from the fact that...4. The factors that contribute to this situation include...5. The change in ...largely results from the fact that...6. We may blame ...,but the real causes are...7. Part of the explanations for it is that ...8. One of the most common factors (causes ) is that ...9. Another contributing factor (cause ) is ...10. Perhaps the primary factor is that ...11. But the fundamental cause is that ...11)结果1. It may give rise to a host of problems.2. The immediate result it produces is ...3. It will exercise a profound influence upon...4. Its consequence can be so great that...12)批驳1)It is true that ..., but one vital point is being left out.2) There is a grain of truth in these statements, but they ignore a more important fact.3) Some people say ..., but it does not hold water.4) Many of us have been under the illusion that...5) A close examination would reveal how ridiculous the statement is.6) It makes no sense to argue for ...7) Too much stress placed on ... may lead to ...8) Such a statement mainly rests on the assumption that ...9) Contrary to what is widely accepted, I maintain that ...13)举例1) A good case in point is ...2) As an illustration, we may take ...3) Such examples might be given easily.4) ...is often cited as an example.14)证明1) No one can deny the fact that ...2) The idea is hardly supported by facts.3) Unfortunately, none of the available data shows ...4) Recent studies indicate that ...5) There is sufficient evidence to show that ...6) According to statistics proved by ..., it can be seen that ...15)开篇1) Many nations have been faced with the problem of ...2) Recently the problem has been brought into focus.3) Recently the phenomenon has become a heated topic.4) Recently the issue has aroused great concern among ...5) Nowadays there is a growing concern over ...6) Never in our history has the idea that ... been so popular.7) Faced with ..., quite a few people argue that ...8) According to a recent survey, ...9) With the rapid development of ..., ...16)结尾1) From what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that ...2) It is high time that strict measures were taken to stop ...3) It is necessary that steps should be taken to ...4) In conclusion, it is imperative that ...5) There is no easy method, but ...might be of some help.6) To solve the above-mentioned problem, we must ...7) In summary, if we continue to ignore the above-mentioned issue, more problems will crop up.8) With the efforts of all parts concerned, the problem will be solved thoroughly.9) We might do more than identify the cause ; it is important to take actions to ...10) Taking all these into account, we ...11) Whether it is goodornot /positiveornegative, one thing is certain/clear...2009年6月英语四六级考试考前必看范文(一)一Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicLongHolidays.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:1.长假给大学生带来的好处2.长假可能给大学生带来的问题3.我应当怎样利用好长假LongHolidaysGenerallyspeaking,longholidaysaregoodforuscollegestudents.Ontheonehand,wehavealotoftimetostudybyourselvesandthusimproveweaknessesandfurtherdevelopstrengths.Ontheotherhand,wecantakepart-timejobs,whichcanmakeusrealizeresponsibilityandmakeourselvesbetterpreparedforsociallife.Buteverycoinhastwosides.Somestudentsfailtomakegooduseoftheirtimeandtheyareaddictedtovariouscomputergames.Iamafraidthattheyarelikelytoruinthemselvesinthisway.AsfarasIamconcerned,Iwilltrytomakethebestuseofmyprecioustime.IwillspendmostofmyholidaysstudyingEnglishforthatIamverypooratit.Inaddition,Iwilltakeapart-timejobasprivateteacher.Bythismeans,Icanearnsomemoneyandputmyknowledgeintopracticeaswell.二Directions:Forthispart，youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicOnaHarmoniousDormitoryLife.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese：1.宿舍生活有时会出现不和谐的情况2.一个和谐宿舍生活的必要性3.如何创造和谐的宿舍生活OnaHarmoniousDormitoryLifeDormitorylifeisanindispensablepartofcollegelife.Butsometimestheharmonyinthedormitorywillbedisturbedinonewayoranother.Asisknowntoall,aharmoniousdormitorylifeisimportanttocollegestudentsandbenefitsallthemembers.Ontheonehand,wecanhaveagoodrestandputourheartintostudy.Ontheotherhand,wewillhaveagoodmoodandenjoybeingtogether.Thereareseveralwaystocreateandmaintainaharmoniousdormitorylife.Firstly,youhavetoevaluateyourlifestyleandtrytogetridofyourdirtyhabits,ifthereareany.Secondly,whenanannoyingsituationarises,you lljusthavetolearntotolerateeachotherandco-exist.Thirdly,you llhavetosharewitheachotherandmakegoodfriends.Inconclusion,weshouldtryourbesttobuildaharmoniousdormitorylifeforthesakeofgoodstudyandgoodlife.三Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicSilenceIsNotAlwaysGold.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:1.在现代社会中， 沉默是金 不一定是好事2.请举例说明3.总结全文SilenceIsNotAlwaysGoldSilenceisgold isapopularsayinginwhichmanypeoplehavebelief.Tothesepeoplespeakingtoomuchisnotamerit.However,ifyoualwayskeepsilent,youwillprobablymissmanygoldenopportunitiesinsteadofobtainingthegoldofsilence.LastweekIreadanarticlewrittenbyanofficelady.Thecompanywheresheworkedhadtwokindsofoffices:cubicleofficeandwindowoffice.Asanewemployeesheworkedinacubicleofficetogetherwithtwentycolleagues.Twoyearslatershestillworkedtherebutsomecolleagueswhocamelaterthanherhadmovedintothewindowoffice.Shefeltconfused.Onedayonecolleaguetoldherthatwindowofficewasn tobtainedwithoutrequest.Butbelievingthatshecertainlygainedoneifshedidagoodjobthewomanhadneveraskedforit.Fromthewoman sexperiencewelearnthatsilenceisnotalwaysgold.Inthemodernsocietyoneneedstospeakhismindandspeakforhisowninterests.四Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicTryingtoRenewKnowledge.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese：1.更新知识的重要性2.怎样更新知识3.你自己的感受TryingtoRenewKnowledgeToday ssocietyisofknowledgeeconomyage,inwhichnewknowledgeemergesmuchfasterthaneverbefore.Moreover,knowledgeplaysanimportantpartinthewholeeconomy.Therefore,everyonefindsitnecessarytorenewhis(orher)knowledge,otherwisehe(orher)willbeleftbehindthesociety.Therearesomewaystoupdateknowledge.Ontheonehand,onecanattenddifferentcoursesatalltypesofschools,eitherpart-timeorfull-time.Ontheotherhand,self-studyis,inasense,amoreconvenientandpracticalmethodbywhichonecaneffectivelyrenewhis(orher)knowledge.Inmyview,Ihaveprimarilydependedonself-taughtmethodintherecentyears.AlthoughIambusydoingdailywork,Istillinsistonteachingmyselfatnight.Inthisway,Icannotonlykeepupwiththeswiftdevelopmentofsocietybutalsoapplynewknowledgetomypracticalwork,whichbenefitsmealot.五Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicWesternFastFood.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:1.洋快餐颇受中国消费者的青睐2.产生这种现象的原因3.我的看法WesternFastFoodFastfoodisbecomingmoreandmorepopularinChina,especiallyamongchildrenandteenagers.Today,nothingismorerepresentativeofthefastpaceofmodernsocietythanfastfood.Thereareseveralreasonsforitspopularity.Foronething,itisfastandconvenient.Gointoafastfoodrestaurant,andyourfoodwillbereadyinaminute.Precioustimewon tbewastedinwaiting-in-linetoorderorwaitingatyourtableforyourfoodtoarrive.Foranother,itspopularityisalsoattributedtothecleanfood,theexcellentserviceandthecomfortableenvironmentofthefastfoodrestaurants,andAmericanstyle.However,Ithinkthatfastfoodisn thealthyenoughbecauseitdoesn tcomposeabalanceddietandislowinnutrition.Fastfoodisonlyagoodchoicewhenyouareinahurryandweshouldturntoitonlyonceinawhile.六、Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicSocialPractice.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:1.大学生越来越重视参与社会实践2.社会实践对大学生学习和生活的影响3.如何正确看待社会实践 我要收藏SocialPracticeSocialpracticeisabridgebetweentheirtheoryandreality.So,inrecentyears,moreandmorecollegestudentschoosetotakepart-timejobsinoroutsideschool.Inthesocialpractice,studentsaresuretolearnmorethantheirtextbooks.Theirparticipationinsocialpracticemightstrengthentheirsenseofsocialresponsibility.Theirclosecontactwiththeworkingpeoplemighthelpthemtoapplytheirknowledgetothesolutiontothepracticalproblem.Butmanyteacherscomplainthattherearefewerandfewerstudentswhopayattentiontotheirstudy.Inmyview,it sanundeniedfactthatstudentsbreakthebalancebetweentheirjobsandstudies,especiallywhentheyfallintoconflict.ButIthinkstudentsshouldspendtheirsparetimetakingpart-timejobs.Timelyparticipationinsocialpracticewillbenefitthemallthroughtheirlife.七、Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicHowtoKeepPsychologicallyHealthy?Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:1.心理健康问题往往是导致疾病的原因2.分析人们产生心理健康问题的原因(可从失业、压力过重、缺少支持、缺乏人际交往能力等方面加以分析)3.你认为人们应如何保持心理健康HowtoKeepPsychologicallyHealthy?Oneinfourpeoplewillexperiencesomekindofmentalhealthprobleminthecourseofayear.Whenyoufailtomanagetheseproblems,theyarelikelytocausevariousmentalillnesses.Thecausesofmentalhealthproblemsoftenvaryalotfromonecasetoanother.Intoday ssociety,agoodnumberofpeoplearesufferingfromheavypressure.Otherslackcommunicationskills.Inaddition,alotofpeopleareignorantofpsychologicalknowledgeabouthowtokeepmentallyfit.Therearealotofwaystocurbmentalhealthproblemsandkeeppsychologicallyhealthy.Firstly,findtherealcauseofyourmentalhealthproblemandseewhetheryoucandosomethingtomakeachange.Secondly,learntorelaxyourselfandtakeexercisetoreleasethepressure.Lastly,youmayfindithelpfultotalktoyourpartnerorfriendaboutyourproblem,orseeksupportandadvicefromapsychologicalconsultant.八、Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicAidEducationinChina.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:AidEducationinChina1.支教的现象2.支教的意义3.你的观点AidEducationinChinaTherehasbeenahottopicrecentlyaboutcollegestudents beingencouragedtohelpchildreninthepoorandremoteareas.Generallyaid-educationishelpfulintwoaspects.Firstofall,itcanbroadenvolunteers horizonsinpoverty-strickenregions.Forinstance,itisagoldenopportunityforvolunteerstoexperienceacompletelydifferentlife.Inaddition,collegestudentshavetoadaptthemselvestotheharshlivingconditions,meanwhiletheycanmakefriendswiththechildren.Inmyview,thefutureofChina seducationdependsonthejointeffortsofthesociety,thegovernmentandallthecitizens.Tosumup,wecollegestudentsshouldtaketheinitiativeinresponsetotheappealforsupplyinghelptochildreninpoorregions.九、Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicSelectingCourses.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:1.选修课程在大学很普遍2.解释其中的原因3.你的看法SelectingCoursesRecently,peopleingrowingnumbersshowtheirconcernaboutselectingcourses.Insomecolleges,studentsarepermittedtopickouttheircourse sprofessorsfreely.Thereasonsarelistedasfollows:Inthefirstplace,studentscanchoosetheteacheraccordingtotheirinterests,whichwillbehelpfulfortheirfuturecareers.Besides,selectingcoursescanreducetherateofstudents absenceindirectlyforstudentsusuallychoosetheirfavoriteteachers.AsfarasIamconcerned,everycoinhastwosides.Ontheonehand,studentsmaylearnthecoursebetter,becausetheymaychoosetheprofessortheyliked.Ontheotherhand,iftheprofessorwhoisverypopularandagreatnumberofstudentswouldliketoattendhis/hercourse,theclassroommustbeovercrowded.Itwillhaveabadimpactontheclass.十、Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowritealetter.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:假设你是Tony，是英语一班二年级学生，因有事不能上外教Ms.Riddle的课，给她写一张请假条，说明你不能来上课的原因。October8,2007DearMs.Riddle,IwouldliketoknowifIcouldaskforacasualleaveofabsencefromyourOralEnglishclassthisThursdaymorning.YesterdayafternoonIgotaphonecallfrommycousin,whoisnowoperatingasmallcompanyinsuburbsofthiscity.Heneedsaninterpreterfortwodaysbutcannotfindthemosttrustworthyperson,sohewantsmetomakeanattempt.ItseemstomethatthisisagoldenopportunitytoputwhatIhavelearnedinyourclassintopractice,butIneedyourpermissionofabsence.IfyouthinkImaygoandhelphimovercomethedifficulty,IamconfidentthatI lldoagoodjobandbothofuswillbethankful.Earnestlyyours,Tony2009年6月英语四六级考试考前必看范文(三)一、Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicIntelligence-NatureorNurture?Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:1.有人认为智力是天生的我要收藏2.也有人认为智力是环境决定的3.如何更好地发展智力Intelligence-NatureorNurture?Nowadays,thereisnoagreementamongpeopleconcerningintelligence.Somepeoplecontendthatintelligenceistosomeextentsomethingwearebornwith.Andthecloserthebloodrelationshipbetweentwopeople,theclosertheyarelikelytobeinintelligence.However,othersmaintainthatenvironmentplaysacrucialroleinourintelligence.Forinstance,ifweputtwoidenticaltwinsindifferentenvironments,wemightsendonetouniversityandtheothertoafactorywherethejobisboring,wewouldfinddifferencesintheirintelligenceseveralyearslater.Justaseverycoinhastwosides,ourintelligenceispartlybornandpartlydeveloped.Thesurewaytodevelopourintelligenceisintelligentparentsaswellasagoodenvironment.二、Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicParentsAretheBestTeachers.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:1.父母是最好的老师2.解释其中的原因3.重申观点ParentsAretheBestTeachersItisyourparentswhoteachyoutowalk;itisyourparentswhoteachyoutospeak;itisyourparentswhoteachyoutodothesebasicthingsinyourlife.Thusparentsshouldbethebestteachers!Firstofall,parentsknowusmorethanothersdo.Parentsgiveuslife,andIconsiderthatwewillspendplentyoftimewiththem.Therefore,theylearnaboutourmeritandshortcomingsclearly.Atthesametime,theywillhelpustoshakeoffourdemerit.Besides,parentsownmuchmorelifeexperiencethanus.Sometimes,theyarejustlikeourmodels.Andasthesayinggoes: Exampleisbetterthanprecept. Thuswewillunconsciouslyimitatesomeofourparents habitsandstylesofbehavior,whichmeansthatwecanlearngoodthingsfromthem.Justasthesayinggoes: Thereisnoplacelikehome. AndIthinkthereisnoteacherlikeourparents.Theyarethebestteachersinourlife.三、Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicAShoppingCenterintheNeighborhood.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:据称，在你所在社区内将建一个大型购物中心。你同意还是反对这个计划?为什么?请说出具体的理由。AShoppingCenterintheNeighborhoodAlthoughlargeshoppingcentersareveryconvenientandgoodplacestospendfreetime,theycanalsobringsomedisadvantages,andforthisreasonIwoulddisagreewiththebuildingofoneinmyneighborhood.Firstofall,onedisadvantageofhavingalargeshoppingcenterwouldbeagreatincreaseintraffic.Morecarswouldnotonlybringtrafficjamsbutalsonoiseandparkingproblems.Second,alargeshoppingcenterrequiresalotofspace.Tobuildone,someopenspacewouldhavetobesacrificed.Wemightnolongerhaveroomforasportsground.Justbecauseoftheabovedisadvantages,Iwouldopposeanyplantoconstructalargeshoppingcenterinmyneighborhood.Althoughitisnecessaryformetovisitshoppingcentersonoccasion,Icouldspendsometimetravelingtoanotheronenotfaraway.MyneighborhoodisapeacefulandquietplaceandIhopeitwillstaythatway.2009年6月英语四六级考试考前必看范文(三)四、Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicHowtoArrangeYourTimeatCollege?Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:对大学生的时间安排有两种不同的看法：有人认为大学生就该整天读书;有人认为参加体育锻炼是大学生生活的一部分?你的看法?总结全文HowtoArrangeYourTimeatCollege?Nowadays,peoplearedividedonthequestionhowstudentsshouldarrangetheirschooldays.Somepeopleclaimstudentsshouldspendthewholeschooldaysinacademicstudies.However,otherscontendphysicalexerciseshouldbearequiredpartofeveryschoolday.Asforme,Iwillchoosethelatterwithouthesitation.Beingastudent,hisorhermaintaskistoworkhardonhisorheracademicstudy.Onlybystudyinghardcanheorsheobtainadequateknowledgefromacademicstudies.Nevertheless,Idon tthinkastudentshouldfocusonstudyingtoomuch,heorsheshouldjoininothermeaningfulactivities.Forinstance,doingphysicalexerciseisagoodwaytomakestudents lifemorecolorfulandbeneficial.Inaword,whenstudentsgainknowledgefromacademicstudies,theyshouldnotneglecttorelaxthemselvesandtakeregularphysicalexercise.五、Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicDoLibrariesBecomeUselessattheAgeofInformation?Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:1.有些人认为信息时代不再需要传统图书馆了，因为2.有些人认为信息时代传统图书馆仍然有重要作用，因为3.你的看法DoLibrariesBecomeUselessattheAgeofInformation?Therehasbeenaheateddiscussionaboutlibrariesattheageofinformationamongpeople.Somepeople,especiallytheyoungergeneration,challengethevalueofconventionallibraries.Whentheyneedanyinformationintheirstudiesorwork,theycanturntotheircomputersforhelp.Forthisreason,theydonotneedtogotoalibraryforborrowingorreturningoneortwobooks.Whileothers,includingmostoldpeopleaswellasscholars,valuelibraries.Theylovelibrariesbecausetheycanenjoypeaceandquietnessinanisolatedspiritualworld.Andtheyalsohaveaccesstorareacademicworksneededfortheirstudiesinthelibraries.Inmyview,conventionallibrariesarestillavailablethoughthereisstillmuchroomforimproving.AttheAgeofInformation,aslongasknowledgeisrespectedandcherished,librarieswon textinctfromourlives.Ontheotherhand,librariesshouldnotrefusethelatestinformationtechnology,whichwillenablethemtoregainthoseyoungreaders.2009年6月英语四六级考试考前必看范文(四)一、Directions：Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledCellPhones.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsandbasedonthefollowinggraghandtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:1.描述上图所示的手机用户变化情况(据统计，2007年上半年手机用户量超过5亿)2.出现这种情况的原因3.对此现象做出评价CellPhonesAsisshowninthechart,cellphonesarebecomingmoreandmorepopularwithinChina.In1999,thenumberofcellphonesinusewasonly24,480,000,butin2002,thenumberismorethan100million,whichisaturningpoint.Theneweststatisticshowsthatin2007thenumberhasexceeded500million.Therearemanyfactorscontributingtothisdevelopment.Firstly,acellphonehasnowiresandcanbecarriedeverywhereeasily.Secondly,acellphoneissomethingwonderfulthatwecanhavefunwithnews,games,musicandchatthroughsendingshortmessages.Thirdly,thedropinpriceandthesimultaneousimprovementinthefunctionshavemadeitpossibleforanaveragepersontomakeuseofacellphone.?Thewideuseofcellphoneshasmadethemmoreandmoreindispensableinpeople sdailylife.Themanyfunctionsofthecellphonehavemadecertainpeoplereluctanttoseparatethemselvesfromtheircellphone.一、Directions：Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledCellPhones.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsandbasedonthefollowinggraghandtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:1.描述上图所示的手机用户变化情况(据统计，2007年上半年手机用户量超过5亿)2.出现这种情况的原因3.对此现象做出评价CellPhonesAsisshowninthechart,cellphonesarebecomingmoreandmorepopularwithinChina.In1999,thenumberofcellphonesinusewasonly24,480,000,butin2002,thenumberismorethan100million,whichisaturningpoint.Theneweststatisticshowsthatin2007thenumberhasexceeded500million.Therearemanyfactorscontributingtothisdevelopment.Firstly,acellphonehasnowiresandcanbecarriedeverywhereeasily.Secondly,acellphoneissomethingwonderfulthatwecanhavefunwithnews,games,musicandchatthroughsendingshortmessages.Thirdly,thedropinpriceandthesimultaneousimprovementinthefunctionshavemadeitpossibleforanaveragepersontomakeuseofacellphone.?Thewideuseofcellphoneshasmadethemmoreandmoreindispensableinpeople sdailylife.Themanyfunctionsofthecellphonehavemadecertainpeoplereluctanttoseparatethemselvesfromtheircellphone.三、Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicHowtoDealwithSub-health?Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:1.随着现代化的不断加速发展，全世界的物质生活水平不断攀升，但人们却日益受到 亚健康 这种不良状态的威胁2.亚健康的具体表现及在我国的蔓延程度(据调查，北京75%、上海72%、广州70%的上班族都处于亚健康状态)3.在现代社会中应怎样解决亚健康问题HowtoDealwithSub-healthWiththemodernizationoftheworld,people sstandardoflivinghasimprovedalot.Thenthereappearsastateofsub-healthamongpeoplewhichposesanewthreattothem.Therearesometypicalsymptomsforpeoplewhoareinastateofsub-health.Firstofall,thosewhosufferfromitoftenhaveaheadacheorbackache.Secondly,theyfeellikehavingarestfrequently.Whatupsetsusmostisthat,thesituationisspreadingcountrywide.Asaresult,moreandmoreworkersinbigcitiesareharassedbyit,withapercentageof75inBeijing,72inShanghaiand70inGuangzhourespectively.Thenhowcanwesolvethisproblemeffectively?Expertssuggestthatthebestwaytokeepourselveshealthyistodoexercises.Itisalsoveryimportantthatpeopleshouldformagoodlivinghabit,forexample,gettingupearlyandgoingtosleepearly.Onlydoingsocanwekeepushealthy.四、Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicAJob-searchingExperience.Youshouldwriteatleast120words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:1.介绍得到这次求职信息的途径2.叙述这次求职经历的全过程3.谈谈你对这次经历的感受或体会AJob-searchingExperienceLastFridaymyEnglishteachertoldmethatoneofherfriendswaslookingforanEnglishgoverness.Iaskedforherfriend snameandphonenumber.Ideterminedtoseizethechanceandhavemyfirstjob.IwasalittlenervouswhenIwenttothewoman shouse.IwastoldthatthetalkbetweenusthatdaywoulddecidewhetherIcouldtakethejob.However,whenthewoman,Lucyasshewascalled,welcomedmeintoherhouse,Ifeltmuchrelaxed.IthoughtaslongasIwassincereandfriendlyIwouldperformwell.Theconversationwentonsmoothly.SheseemedmuchmoreinterestedinmyhabitsandhobbiesthanhowgoodIwasatEnglish.Ithappenedthatwehavethesamehobby:playingtennis.Itoldheraboutmyfamilyandschoollife.ObviouslyIsucceededandfromthenonIwenttoteachherEnglisheveryweekend.Lucytoldmelaterthatitwasmysinceritythatmadeherwillinglyacceptme.Itistruethatwecanplaysometrickswhileseekingforajob,butremembertobesincere.It sthesecretofmysuccess.五、Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositionentitledMyOpiniononCampusLove.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:1.有人认为校园恋爱的影响不好2.有人却认为校园恋爱没有什么不好3.你的观点MyOpiniononCampusLoveOncampus,loverscanbefoundhereandthere.Somepeoplethinktoomuchintimacyhasabadinfluence.Ittakesloverstoomuchtimeandenergy.Furthermore,theirintimacycandistracttheirownaswellasotherstudents attentionfromstudy.Campusshouldbeaplaceforstudyandshouldmaintainanatmosphereoflearning.Ontheotherhand,otherpeoplebelieveitisOK.Pursuingloveisallrighttostudentsoncampusandintimacyisanaturalexpressionoflove.Somescholarsoflawholdthatfriendshipandappropriateintimacyareanimportantpartofstudentdevelopment.Inmyopinion,whatallpeopleshoulddoisjustleaveitasitis.Universitystudentsareadults,andtheycanhandletheirownaffairswellenough.However,theyhavetoadmitthatschoolisaplacewherepeoplereceiveaneducationandtheirmaintaskistostudy.Therefore,studentsareexpectedtobehavethemselvesinproperways.2009年6月英语四六级考试考前必看范文(五)一、Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayonthetopicDoWeNeed Nevergiveup ?Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:1. 永不言弃 一直被认为是一种积极的生活态度，是个人成功的关键因素2.但是，也有人认为适当的放弃才是明智的选择3.你对此的看法及理由DoWeNeed Nevergiveup ?Itiswidelyacceptedthat Nevergiveup ,astrongandpositivelifeattitude,isthekeyforindividualsuccessonthegroundsthatpermanentpersistencemayboostourconfidence,strengthenourwill,andprovideusasecondchanceforsuccesswhenweareinhardship.However,othersarguethatsensibleabandonmentismorepreciousthanblindpersistencebecausethewiseoneshouldchoosethemostsuitableareaforhimself/herself.Inmyopinion,weneedtolearntogiveuptimely.Themostimmediatereasonisthatweshouldadjustouraimcarefullyinordertogoaheadcontinuously.Sometimes,togiveupthoseunrealistictargetsisessentialforsuccess.Besides,theattitude Nevergiveup exhaustsusbothmentallyandphysically.Onlythroughlearningtogiveupcanweleadapleasantandrelaxinglife.Finally,thetemporarycomprisemeansanewstart,abeginningbringingnewhopes,expectationsandopportunitiesforus.Passiveasgivingupsoundsalike,itrepresentsamorematureandrealisticmentality.Ifthoseopposingthisattitudecantakeintoconsiderationofitsbenefits,thenthismayseemacceptableinourlives.二、Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicHowtoSolvetheHousingProbleminBigCities?Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:1.住房问题在大城市变得越来越严峻2.住房问题产生原因及给城市带来的影响3.建议一个解决办法(如：多造高层建筑;向地下发展;建造卫星城市;疏散城市人口等)HowtoSolvetheHousingProbleminBigCities?Withthedevelopmentofmodernindustry,moreandmorepeopleareflowingintobigcities.Accordingly,thehousingprobleminbigcitiesisbecomingmuchmoreserious.Peopleinthebigcityarecomplaininghousingshortageandroaringpriceofthehousing.Asweknow,thetemptationandopportunitiesprovidedbybigcitiesattractpeoplewhowanttomakeafortuneinbigcities,whichisthemajorcauseofhousingprobleminbigcities.Besides,housevacancyandspeculatinginthehousingmarketarebecomingthetoughproblem.Wecan tdenythehousingproblemhasbroughtaboutgreatpressuretothelow-incomefamilies.Meanwhile,solvingthisproblemwillaffectthepublic sconfidenceonthegovernment.Tosolvethisproblem,Ithinkbuildingsatellitecitiesinthesuburbsismorepractical.Thefreshairandbeautifulsceneryinthesuburbswillpullmanypeoplefromtheovercrowdedcityandalleviatethepressureofhousing.三、Directions：Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledHowtoEliminateFakeDiplomas?Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:目前假文凭现象屡见不鲜这种现象造成的危害我们应该怎么做HowtoEliminateFakeDiplomas?Therehasbeenaseriousepidemicoffakediplomasinsomebigcitiesrecently.UsuallyacertificateofBachelor sDegreecostsabout200yuan,whichisreallycheapcomparedwiththe4yearsofhardworkandtheprettybigsumoffeesinvolvedinnormalwaysofgettingthediploma.Thevictimsoffakediplomasarefirstofallemployers,whopayhighsalariesbutdonotgetrealtalents.Peoplewhohavegenuinediplomasarealsohurtgreatly.Theyhavehonestlyspent4orevenmoreyearsandgreatenergyworkinghardinschools,butcannotgetanyadvantageinjobhunting.Tocombattheepidemic,practicalabilityandindividualpersonalityshouldberecognizedasimportantfactorsofexcellentjobperformance.Besides,effectivemeasuressupportedbyadvancedITtechnologyshouldbeintroducedandtakentohelpemployersdistinguishgenuinediplomasfromfakeones.四、谈谈你对选秀节目的看法OnTVShow时下电视选秀节目非常流行有人认为选秀很好，能给普通人展示自己的机会我的观点OnTVShowTVhasbeenonemediumofcommunicationthathasconnectedmillions.Anditisthislinkthatmakestalenthuntshowsonthetubeamazinglyinfluential.Youngfacesconveyingdisappointmentorevenoverwhelmingjoyhavebecomeacommonsightonasmanychannelsasyourremoteallowsyoutosurf.SomepeoplehavetheiropinionsontheTVshows.Theadvantagesoftheshowsarecleartosomepeople.Foronething,intermsofbusiness,theincreasingpopularityoftalentshowshashelpedthechannelsingeneratinghugeincomebywayofadvertisingandpromotions.Foranotherthing,theTVshowscanmakethecommonpeoplehaveopportunitytoshowthemselves.Personally,Isidewiththeformeropinion.Itisawonderfulfeelingandagreatwaytorelaxformetowatchtalentshowsandseeordinarypeoplelikemyselfbecomefamousandwincashprizes.Aslongastalentshowsareentertainingandinspiringus,thereisgreatsenseinkeepingandencouragingthem.五、ALetterofAdvice假设你是一名大四学生，即将毕业离校，请你根据四年的大学生活的经历给大一新生写一封忠告信：1.作简单介绍2.大一新生如何适应大学生活3.强调学习英语的重要性ALetterofAdviceDearFreshmen,I,theundersigned,amaseniorintheComputerScienceDepartmentofPekingUniversity.Iwouldliketosayafewwordstoyou,whichIhopewouldbehelpfultoyou.Tobeginwith,thechangeofideasisofmostimportanceforfreshmentoadaptthemselvestocampuslife.Duringthemiddleschooldays,weusuallydependuponourteachersatschoolandparentsathome.However,thelifeandstudyonuniversitycampusfeaturesindependence,whichisessentialtoourpsychologicaldevelopment.Inmyview,wehadbetteralwaysbearinmindtheideaofindependence.What smore,Englishlearningisamust.Ononehand,withoutCET4certificate,wecannotgetourdegreewhenwegraduatefromuniversity.Ontheotherhand,whenwehuntforjob,Englishlevelisadecidingfactor.Therefore,IdohopethatallofyouwillhaveagoodunderstandingofthenecessityoflearningEnglishwell.GoodLucktoyou!SincerelyYoursLiMing2009年6月英语四六级考试考前必看范文(六)一、InternetHarmony1.随着社会和经济发展，网络成为了每个人必不可少的获取信息的工具2.但是，在网络上也出现了一些不和谐的因素，如垃圾信息，黄色网站，虚假新闻，网络炒作等 壹壹英语考试www.yeeYi.net3.如何采取措施制止和消除这些现象InternetHarmonyTheadventoftheInternetusheredinaneweraofinterpersonalcommunicationsandbusinessoperations.Undoubtedly,theNetarerevolutionizingthedailylivesofthepeoplewhohaveanaccesstoit.TheprimaryreasonbehindtheInternetboomrootsinitsmultifunction.ArangeofproblemslurkingbehindthefrenzyofInternetimpressivelystandout.AvastmajorityofInternetusers mailboxesaresaturatedwithjunkmails,anissuewhichsparksstrongcriticismandgeneratesthelossofcorporateproductivity.Pornwebsiteslureagrowingnumberofyoungpeople svisits.Falsenewsviathee-mail,BBSandchatroomincreasinglyposesathreattothesocialprosperityandstability.Tocrackdownthem,weshouldpushforamoreeffectivelytoughlaw.Weshouldjoinourforcestolaunchanation-widecampaign,includingimposingstiffpenaltiesonspammers,shuttingdownorblockingthelewdsitesandintroducingareal-nameregistrationsystemtocurbfraudulentmessages.Wecanfullybelievethatourcombinedeffortswillreaprewards.Acleancyberspacewillpaintourlivesmorecolorfully.二、Livingon-campusoroff-campus?1.分别阐述住校的好处和在外租房的好处2.你对在校住和在外租房的看法Livingon-campusoroff-campus?Livingon-campusmakesiteasiertogetorientedtothewaythingsaredone.Plus,youinteractmorewithotherstudents.Keepingupwithstudiesinyourfirstyearishardenough.Youshouldnothavetoworryaboutfindingyourwayaroundandfiguringouttheuniversitybureaucracy.Livinginthedormitoryalsomakeastudentfeelmoreapartoftheuniversitycommunity.Therearemoreopportunitiesforyoutoinvolveinuniversityactivitiesandnetworkingwithstudentsanduniversityadministration.Livingoff-campus,however,isadefiniteadvantageforolderstudents.Findinganapartment,dealingwithleasesandthelandlord sregulations,cookingmeals,andfiguringoutbudgetsareallgoodpracticeforlifeaftergraduation.Off-campushousingalsogivesstudentsabetterperspectiveonwhatisgoingonaroundthem.Campuscanbelikelittleworlds.Gettingtoknowneighborswhoarenotstudentsisgoodforstudentscomingfromdifferenceplaces.Ithinkitisbetterforcollegestudentstoliveoncampusduringtheirfirsttwoyears,andthenmoveintoanapartmentforoff-campuslife,whilejuniorsandseniorsneedtheindependenceofoff-campuslife.三、Directions:Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononGreenOlympics，Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsaccordingtothesuggestionsgivenbellowinChinese;1.现在社会上有很多环境污染和精神污染的现象，提出你对 绿色奥运 的看法。2.为什么要提倡 绿色奥运 。3.提倡绿色奥运，从自己做起。GreenOlympicsOlympicGames,asweallknow,isahistoricsportsmeeting. GreenOlympics ,isoneofthethreethemesofBeijing2008OlympicGames.Atpresent,people slifeisbeingfloodedwithexhaustgasfromautomobile,bluefilm,wastewaterandsoon.Owingtothesephenomena,weshouldadvocate GreenOlympics ,andIampositiveofthispoint.Twopossiblereasonsareasfollows.Firstly,environmentalprotectionbenefitspeople shealth.Intermsofincreasingnumberoftrashesaroundus,suchaswhiteplasticbags,one-offcupsandchopsticks,itissensibleofdisposingofthemreasonably.Soweoughttousecleantechnology,renewableandrecyclablematerials.Secondly,environmentalprotectioniscrucialtoourcountry,andeventotheworld.LotsofcountriesattachedmoreattentiontoembracetheOlympicspirits higher,faster,andstronger .Inconclusion,ascollegestudentsandtheyounggeneration,weshouldtryourbesttoadvocate GreenOlympics .The2008OlympicGameswillbeagreenanduniqueOlympics.四、Shouldgradstudentbepaidhigherthannon-grads?1.大学生目前存在错误心理 大学生应比非大学生挣钱多给出大学生会有这种错误的心理的原因从非大学生的发展状况来批判大学生这种错误的心理Shouldgradstudentsbepaidhigherthannon-grads?Inourcountry,itisobviousnowthattheuniversitygraduatesearnmoremoneythannon-graduates.Iquiteagreewiththosegraduateswhohavepaidalotfortheirstudiesandexpecttomakemoreforeitherhimselforhisfamily.However,itisnotsooptimisticallyforthosewhohopetomakeit.Thecriticalcareercompetitionmakesthemfrustratedduetomanyfactorsinvolved.Oneoftheutmostfactorsisthattheyfeelwhattheyanticipateisnotmatchingupwithwhattheyhavefoundinreality.Manyuniversitygraduatesarenotsatisfiedwithwhattheygetforwhattheyhavedone.Asamatteroffact,someofthemexpectsounrealisticthattheyimmediatelylosethecredittotheworkforcetheybelongto.Onthecontrary,someofthenon-gradswhoaremorerealisticincareerhuntingtendtogetmoresatisfiedjobcomparedwithgraduates.Thuswhatreallymattershereinsalarybalanceishowonecancontributetotheorganizationratherthanwhatbackgroundtheyhold.ThetuitionisreallyhighinChina.Manyhighqualitystudentsduetothishavelosttheiracademicpursuit.Anyresponsiblegovernmentshouldinevitablytakethisburdenandputmoremoneyinordertobringupbetternextgenerationforthenation.五、Students RatingofTheirTeachers学生给老师打分已很普遍人们对其持不同态度我的看法Students RatingofTheirTeachersNowadays,ithasbecomeascommonincollegesanduniversitiesforstudentstogradeteachersasforteacherstogradestudents.Insomeuniversitiesstudents ratinghasevenbecometheonlysourceofinformationonteachingeffectiveness.This,however,hascausedgreatcontroversy.Someareinfavoroftheratingsystem.Theyholdthatsincestudentsattendtheteachers classeseveryday,theyshouldhavetheiropinionabouttheirteachers effectiveness.Others,onthecontrary,arestronglyagainstit.Theybelievethatthereismuchmoretoteachingthanwhatisshownonstudents ratingforms.Studentsshouldnotbeexpectedtojudgewhetherthematerialsusedareuptodateorhowwelltheteacherknowsaboutthesubject.Thesejudgmentsrequireprofessionalknowledge,whichisbestleftfortheteachers colleagues.Ithinkstudents ratingoftheirteachersisnecessary,butitshouldbeconductedinawaythatcanreallyshedmeaningfullightonteachers performance.Insteadofratingtheteachers knowledgeonthesubject,studentsshouldbeaskedtoestimatewhattheythemselveshaveleanedinacourse,andtoreportonsuchthingsasateacher sabilitytocommunicatewithstudents,hisrelationshipwithstudents,andhisabilitytoarouseinterestinthesubject.
